23 November 2006
A poem
You didn't know Keesie has his poetic side? Neither did we...
I like to sit upon my stoep
And eat a little chicken soep
The taste, it throws me for a loep
And then I have to go and poep
I'm new at this; I am a roekje
I'll place a bet and call my boekje
And now I'm off to get some noekje
It's better than a sugar koekje
Comments
I like it. Poop poems are hard to come by these days.
# posted by Hammer : Friday, November 24, 2006 12:38:14 PM
Just beautiful. Bought a tear to my eye.
# posted by kees : Friday, November 24, 2006 2:56:55 PM
ahhhh, don't quit your day job just yet..poets don't get famous while they are still alive..and I ain't never met one who had any money
# posted by GUYK : Friday, November 24, 2006 5:49:07 PM
Bravo!
Have you found an agent yet?
Surely a book deal is in the works.
# posted by Erica : Saturday, November 25, 2006 12:22:06 AM
Amazingly better than Nantucket stuff. Really.
# posted by Kim : Saturday, November 25, 2006 2:21:09 AM
that boy's got TALENT!
# posted by tony : Sunday, November 26, 2006 7:33:54 PM
Have you thought of writing for Hallmark?
# posted by BobG : Sunday, November 26, 2006 9:44:02 PM
.. most excellent... genius yet again!...
Eric
# posted by Anonymous : Sunday, November 26, 2006
A big thank you to all you kind people.
If recited after a big meal of cabbage stew it does have a nice ring to it.
I like to sit upon my stoep
And eat a little chicken soep
The taste, it throws me for a loep
And then I have to go and poep
I'm new at this; I am a roekje
I'll place a bet and call my boekje
And now I'm off to get some noekje
It's better than a sugar koekje
Comments
I like it. Poop poems are hard to come by these days.
# posted by Hammer : Friday, November 24, 2006 12:38:14 PM
Just beautiful. Bought a tear to my eye.
# posted by kees : Friday, November 24, 2006 2:56:55 PM
ahhhh, don't quit your day job just yet..poets don't get famous while they are still alive..and I ain't never met one who had any money
# posted by GUYK : Friday, November 24, 2006 5:49:07 PM
Bravo!
Have you found an agent yet?
Surely a book deal is in the works.
# posted by Erica : Saturday, November 25, 2006 12:22:06 AM
Amazingly better than Nantucket stuff. Really.
# posted by Kim : Saturday, November 25, 2006 2:21:09 AM
that boy's got TALENT!
# posted by tony : Sunday, November 26, 2006 7:33:54 PM
Have you thought of writing for Hallmark?
# posted by BobG : Sunday, November 26, 2006 9:44:02 PM
.. most excellent... genius yet again!...
Eric
# posted by Anonymous : Sunday, November 26, 2006
A big thank you to all you kind people.
If recited after a big meal of cabbage stew it does have a nice ring to it.
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I like it. Poop poems are hard to come by these days.
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: Friday, November 24, 2006 12:38:00 PM
: Friday, November 24, 2006 12:38:00 PM 
ahhhh, don't quit your day job just yet..poets don't get famous while they are still alive..and I ain't never met one who had any money
Bravo!
Have you found an agent yet?
Surely a book deal is in the works.
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Have you found an agent yet?
Surely a book deal is in the works.
# posted by : Saturday, November 25, 2006 12:22:00 AM
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